#1) Merge Branches
> Usually, these are folders that have been branch from each other
=> Usually, these are folders that have been branched from each other
#2) Hardware Requirements
> Both server and client requires Windows 2000(SP3) and above for OS.
=> Both server and client require Windows 2000(SP3) and above for OS.
(3.0.1, 2769)
Reporting two typos in index
Moderator: SourceGear
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Perry
awkward sentence
Share Branch
This is awkward:
> If the Share Branch is on a shared folder, it is implied recursive.
This would be more conventional, I think:
=> If the Share Branch is on a shared folder, it is implicitly recursive.
Actually I still find it a bit unclear -- is the share implicitly recursive because it is on a folder, or because it is on a folder which is shared? I suppose it would be the latter (although it would help if the page reminded me whether or not Share Branch is recursive on non-shared folders).
This is awkward:
> If the Share Branch is on a shared folder, it is implied recursive.
This would be more conventional, I think:
=> If the Share Branch is on a shared folder, it is implicitly recursive.
Actually I still find it a bit unclear -- is the share implicitly recursive because it is on a folder, or because it is on a folder which is shared? I suppose it would be the latter (although it would help if the page reminded me whether or not Share Branch is recursive on non-shared folders).
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Perry
Another minor note
Pin Files
Delete a Pinned File
> If it is undeleted, it remains pinned at the same version number when it was deleted.
I believe "as" is needed here:
=> If it is undeleted, it remains pinned at the same version number as when it was deleted.
Further down on the same page
Commit Pin
> You can only Pin from the History Explorer. It is placed in its own change set...
This is quibbling, but the "it" can cause the reader to stumble, as the reference doesn't really exist in the prior sentence. Perhaps:
=> You can only Pin from the History Explorer. The pin operation is placed in its own change set...
Delete a Pinned File
> If it is undeleted, it remains pinned at the same version number when it was deleted.
I believe "as" is needed here:
=> If it is undeleted, it remains pinned at the same version number as when it was deleted.
Further down on the same page
Commit Pin
> You can only Pin from the History Explorer. It is placed in its own change set...
This is quibbling, but the "it" can cause the reader to stumble, as the reference doesn't really exist in the prior sentence. Perhaps:
=> You can only Pin from the History Explorer. The pin operation is placed in its own change set...